The Family who Survived an Attack - Narritive Writing

The Family who Survived an Attack

A Long time ago in Paraki Springs lived a Happy family there names where:

Lily the mother,Dustin the Father  & There too kids.  Sam   & Kyla they were both 13 but were born different days  & months. They lived on

Dolan st. Lily was Pregnant with a Baby Girl they were going to name her  Lucy they both agreed.
One Day they went to the Beach to cool of. They all had a wonderful time. Sam  & Kyla were swimming in the ocean *splash* went the water . Lily  & Dustin were sitting in the sun  & Having something to eat.

It was getting late  & the Kids were tired. They Packed up  & Went to the Car *slam* went the door  & Off they went home.. It was an amazing  & Hot day the kids were asleep  & Lily  & Dustin were sleeping when *Ahhh* went Lily she was in Pain *ahh* it was her stomach it was in pain. Dustin carried Lily out to the car & Told Sam  & Kyla to hurry & get into the car. *Brrr* went the car & off they went. Dustin Took Lily to the hospital.  It was 3am in the Morning  & they have been waiting for 30 minutes since they have arrived. Finally the Doctor came to talk to Dustin. He said *we have good news Lily just had a baby* Dustin was shocked *Dustin ran into the room where their she was the new baby girl. *Lily looked tired  & Happy. Lily H&e the Baby to Dustin. The Baby smiled,Dustin smiled back. He kissed Her on the Forehead. Lily was tired  & She needed some sleep so the Doctor said she will stay for 3 more hours to sleep & you can see her after her nap. 3 hours later & Lily was awake & she was eating her breakfast. Dustin,Sam  & Lily came to see her & bring her Home. Lily smiled & got up & they lifted.

1 year later Kyla  & Sam were finally 14  & Both went to Water Park for there Birthday.Lucy turned 4 Today & they were Planning a Party for her.

Sam  & Kyla helped out Make the Place look nice  & Make the yummy foods for the Party.Lily  & Dustin were so happy  & excited. Lucy loved to Play outside with their Dog Luke  & their cat mr Midnight. Mr Midnight was dark as night  & Luke was Bright like the sunset. Lucy was Playing with Luke  & Mr Midnight they had a great time. Rolling around  & Playing tag. Sam  & Kyla was Making Caramel Slice it was Lucy’s Favourite.

They Finished the Food  & it was time for Lucy to open her presents. Lily  & Dustin Got her 7 presents in them were A Teddy bear,  a Big toy Car for her to ride in, a Dollhouse, A Girl doll,A Swing set, Toys  & A Toy Phone for her to play with. Sam  & Kyla got her a Big Chocolate Egg With a Toy With someone Lollies  & Money. After Opening  Presents they had an amazing  & Delicious dinner. *mmmhmm* it was so delicious said Sam. *it was* Said Dustin

Later that night Kyla  & Sam Heard someone Break in & went down stairs to see who was it. It was  man in black he went into the kitchen  & grabbed a Knife. Kyla  & Sam waked up Lucy  & Their Parents. Dustin Got the Bat  & Lily had a gun so if he tried to Stab one of them. The Man walked up stairs looking for them He finally found them & went to attack. They Bumped her over making him hit his head. Sam  & Kyla ran outside with Lucy  & Rang the Police. While Dustin  & Lily tired him up. They were in relief. Lucy was crying in fear  & Terror.

They were wishing for their parents to be alive.  They waited & waited until they parents finally come out with the old man In handcuffs. *Mummy  & Daddy* said Lucy as she ran to them. *Lucy wait up* Sam  & Kyla ran across the road to where their parents were.  *aww lucy* Said Lily when she picked her up.

Lucy smiled. Dustin Smiled back . They were tired  & they wanted to go to bed but the police needed to see if the house is alright & good for the family to go back in.

It was finally over. *Huh* said Kyla  & Sam. They finally got into the house & got some rest. Lucy  & Dustin fell asleep on the couch. Sam  & Kyla Went to their rooms & got ready for bed.  The next day they went to the Pools to cool off & have a fun time & forget the troubles they had last night.  They were happy & blessed to be  happy &  safe .  they were finished & they went home  safe  &  sound.   I wish you never comes back & hurts us again.

They  went home  & had their dinner it was delicious. They Prayed for protection for their family  & Friends. They got ready for bed & Dreamed.

it was finally  & they are going to  grow up go up into young  & Mature Adults  in the future  & I hope they make the right decision.  

Participating & Contributing - Relating to Others - Camp Raglan

WALT: write about what we did this morning about what to except at Camp Raglan with the 2 Key Competencies.

This morning we did a group discussion about the 2 Key Competencies - 1. Participation & Contributing 2. Relating to Others.

What does Participation & Contributing Mean To My Group:

• Co-operating
• Contributing into group Discussions
• Responsibilities
• Activitly Involved 
• Confidence
• Sustainability
• Creates Opportunities
• Sense of Belonging
• Participation

What Does Relating to Others Mean To My Group:

•  Accepting Each Other
• Respecting Property & People
• Co-Operation & Negotiation
• Effective Communitcation
• Understanding Rules and Listening
• Interacting With others
• Agreements
• Positive Attitude

My Number one thing I want to look Forward to at Camp Raglan is The people there, The fun activites that we all as a group are going to enjoy, Friendships & Making new connections and friendships with others.

Going to Camp Raglan will be a very big experience for me since i love being outdoors and experiencing new and wild things & going to camp with friends will be my first time.

 

Online Safety - Make Sure your Cyber Smart & Follow The Rules

WALT: write about Online Safety 

Today I wrote about the Rules on the Internet/ Cyber Smart Rules.

Please leave a Helpful Comment to help me imporve and change my Description about my Blog posts.

My Favourite Book - Blooms Taxonomy - Reading Makes your Learning Better

 WALT:I am learning to describe my favourite book using Bloom's Taxonomy thinking skills

Today I Did Another Reflection on Bad Grammar and Imporved my Infomation about it

I Hope you Like it and Please leave an Helpful Comment to help me with my learning

Blog Commenting - Commenting Makes a Difference in Learning

WALT: Respond to texts online.
Today I wrote some helpful comments on students from my school and a student from another school
If you would like to comment on either of my school or other schools blogs/Clusters Blogs Here are The Links
My Schools Blog
Clusters Blog
Please leave a Helpful comment down below to help me make changes in my blogs. Thank you :)

Technology Day Lesson 3

Today for technology i did Graphic Designs if was fun i did to bunnys one is evil and on is not.
i did this because this looks really indepth and  i made this to see what it will look like. i learnt lots of cool thing on tinkercad and it can help you see different ways to make things for example my evil and good bunnie. Please try this out for yourself its really cool to use.

Paris Multiplying Using Rounding and Compensating Clinic

WALT: multiply using tidy numbers, rounding and compensating.
i wrote the answers in my maths book to solve the questions.
so if you know the answers please leave your answer down below.

Paris Maths Challenge T4W5

WALT: solve out the problems and Make sure it is correct by checking it with a buddy.

Paris Spelling Time T4W5

WALT: Find the Meaning of these words and Write them Down in you own word

Paris Current Events T4W5

WALT: write down the information that we learnt from KiwiKidsNews
Please leave a comment down below